[Really, how can he help but feel flattered when she says that she trusts his judgement.

And it is indeed a detailed list in there of the things that could be better--moments where she needs better connection to her breath, or where to improve the melodic line, where a particular part of her acting could be improved. Additionally, there is also a list of items that should stay in her performance--particular moments where she shined in her acting with Benjamin, with the Chorus, where her voice soared above all others and truly sparkled.]

If there is anything that you might like clarification on or would like to go through, I would be more than happy to do so.